I stood out under the darkening sky.

My palm stretched.

A drop of rain fell on it.

It glistened like a tear..

and reminded me of all those tears

you promised me I would never shed.

And I looked at the drop of rain,

and then could see it no more

as my eyes vied with the rain.

and

the rain

ceded victory to me.

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Comment by Skate98 on August 17, 2011 at 6:15pm
Nice
Comment by Bladebearer on March 25, 2011 at 6:40pm
nice work
Comment by CrimsonAngel on March 25, 2011 at 6:30pm
whats that? :P
i wrote this lol
Comment by daniel on March 25, 2011 at 6:03pm
coool. what is it, a longer verzion of haiku?

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