Read it! I commandz chu! =3 It's a poem from when I was in love. Comment please!

PART 1

And what when he's your best friend too?
When the moments spent together outnumber hairs on your head
And the laughs you've shared, teardrops in the ocean blue
What then will you do?

When you know each other so well
The unlikeliest of friends
At that first fateful encounter
You knew it could never end

When the sparks flew so freely
they illuminated your sky
and the memories you had with him
soar up, like rockets they fly

When you loved one another
Bound by a rope of mystery
of passion and faith in each other
when your hearts are brimming with amity

When your mind cried out to you
and pondered how you felt that brotherly love
transforming, metamorphing
into something else, something above

And you knew he felt it too
That feeling, growing, changing, on the brim
When your mind fluttered in anticipation
And your dreams blossomed with images of him

Then that fateful day came
The one day you dreamt of for eternity
When he asked to be more than friends
And you replied with certainty 

When your eyes are radiantly bursting fireworks

  Like waves to the sea to him your thoughts were true
The passage of time, the flowing aura of space
They are no longer of significance, eclipsed by him and you

 

~Leah~

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Comment by daniel on May 4, 2011 at 10:51am
interesting.....good work.
Comment by 117 on May 1, 2011 at 10:05pm
I like this.
Comment by Breloom is mah Shroom(; on May 1, 2011 at 12:25pm
thanks ppls and it meannnnns somethingg
Comment by Breloom is mah Shroom(; on April 25, 2011 at 3:17pm
Thanks! This is only the first half so its more happy than the second lol =P
Comment by CrimsonAngel on April 25, 2011 at 3:15pm
beautiful! ik how ya feel!! :D

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